Eyes of Stardom
Eyes of StardomWithin arrogance through patienceforged by uncomfortable memoriesdrawn from dreams,shattered awareness came.Heartbroken thoughts dull thunderstruckflashes, blisters turn to...
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Bee,This is sad and powerful. Your first line socks two words that often don't go together. Even with your last line of s2 I taste the regret you speak about. Thickets of hair is great imagery and...
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Bee ---blinds the eyes, drums on the ear...silver and green copper leaf, Thickets, unfortunate tangles in auburn hair,curry and saffron shades chillwhat senses warmed.relentless emotion. if i smoked,...
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I am at a loss, because I am at an advantage. ::smirk:: You speak these words on a throne, guidons with your colors, to eager eyed men in line to die for you. That presence allows you to share only...
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taiakaI dig the rough-edged diction. Maybe change "came" in first strophe to something punchier?me
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